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First Chapter—$179
Complete developmental and line edit for your first chapter.
Includes:
- Notes on:
- First impressions
- Structure and pacing
- Initiation of plot
- Introduction and development of characters
- Intrigue and uniqueness
- Flow
- Cohesiveness
- Show, don’t tell
- Detail and worldbuilding without infodumping
- Your Voice
- Stakes and Goals
- Dialogue
- How to impress a reader
- Tracked in-text suggestions for
- Clarifying possible confusion
- Smoother flow and transitions
- Word flow (how it sounds)
- Thought flow (how it feels)
- Trimming redundancy
- Removing telling sentences
- Removing unnecessary “fluff” words
- Tightening vocabular—e.g., “ran quickly” will become “sprinted”
- Aiding “show, don’t tell”
First Page—$49
Complete developmental and line edit for your first page. See above (First Chapter) for full details.
Payment
- ALL package costs will be credited to the project price of any further work on the project.
- All payment utilizes PayPal.
- Payment due at booking.